Below is a Doc version of the Rough Draft, with a link to view peer comments. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DSsHR7zorjNdPjncee2A-0rKeAcYv7dEBO1p43UfoXQ/edit?usp=sharing Below is a PDF version of the Final Draft, with a link to download and view.
My peer reviewed draft lacks many aspects that my final draft has. It consists of an introduction and the first body paragraph. Therefore, it lacks the two additional body paragraphs, conclusion, works cited page, title, and many in-text MLA citations that I added in the final draft. The second body paragraph I wrote in the Read More …
Below is a Doc version of the Rough Draft, with a link to view peer comments. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gcPW8SRmm5ofudPpuzK0h3yce0Z5xVjr6j3J4zVYpPY/edit?usp=sharing Below is a PDF version of the Final Draft, with a link to view.
The first draft of Essay 1 was very incomplete and was missing a final paragraph and conclusion. In order to fulfill these gaps in the essay, I added a third body paragraph and made it counterclaim, and added a conclusion paragraph as well. I didn’t add many quotations in the final draft, except for ones Read More …
Below is a PDF version of the Rough Draft, along with a link to view peer comments. https://docs.google.com/document/d/15Xz5hnlNBz99GKicbVWwpY8D6ryGOfyjOiKxl4zFPCI/edit?usp=sharing Below is a PDF version of the Final Draft, along with a link. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_C6OyzLAxxmEv_yRJ_zT0Fk6iJVgJZ9QFtfr7EA0mEQ/edit?usp=sharing
